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This week’s words are “fall” and try.” I decided to try my hand at a Tanka this time. As the guidelines suggest, I used synonyms of the words, “tumble” and “attempt.” See what you think.
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When first I tumble,
I rise, re-attempt my feat.
I am successful.
Failure will never stop me.
Quitting isn’t an option.
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Author Abbie Johnson Taylor
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Excellent Tanka poem, Abbie. You have a fabulous outlook on life. ❤
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Thank you, Colleen. I’ve tried to remain positive in light of many adversities I’ve faced in my life, and this poem reflects that.
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Great job, Abbie. ❤️
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Thank you, Colleen.
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Very inspiring, Abbie. Sometimes failure is the first step to success. 😀
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I agree. Thank you for stopping by and commenting.
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