This feature was created by Colleen Chesebro. Click here for guidelines. This week’s words are “ghost” and “hollow.” In celebration of my late husband’s birthday, which was yesterday, the following Tanka depicts my life without him. Because the trick of this challenge is to only use synonyms of the words, you’ll note my use of the words “spirit” and “empty.” Enjoy, and have a great day.
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His spirit with me,
Though my heart is still empty
six years after death,
I go on with life, knowing
that he’s in a better place.
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Author Abbie Johnson Taylor
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That’s Life: New and Selected Poems
My Ideal Partner: How I Met, Married, and Cared for the Man I Loved Despite Debilitating Odds
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Very moving…thank you, Abbey for sharing your heart.
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You’re welcome, Joan. Thank you for stopping by and commenting.
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Abbie, this is such a poignant poem. Thank you for writing from your heart. ❤
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Thank you, Colleen. I appreciate you stopping by and visiting.
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Absolutely, Abbie. It’s a great pleasure. ❤
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