How to Build a Believable World #Thursday Book Feature

Write Great Fiction – Description & Setting

By Ron Rozelle

 

What Amazon Says

 

How essential is setting to a story? How much description is too much? In what ways do details and setting tie into plot and character development? How can you use setting and description to add depth to your story?

You can find all the answers you need in Write Great Fiction: Description & Setting by author and instructor Ron Rozelle. This nuts-and-bolts guide – complete with practical exercises at the end of each chapter – gives you all the tips and techniques you need to:

        • Establish a realistic sense of time and place
        • Use description and setting to drive your story
        • Craft effective description and setting for different genres
        • Skillfully master showing vs. telling

 

With dozens of excerpts from some of today’s most popular writers, Write Great Fiction: Description & Setting gives you all the information you need to create a sharp and believable world of people, places, events, and actions.

 

My Thoughts

 

One thing I don’t like about this book is the use of the ampersand sign in the title instead of the written word “and.” To me, this implies laziness. Of course, it may not have been Ron Rozelle’s decision, but come on. How much time and space does the word “and” take?

Otherwise, although I took issue with some of the author’s suggestions on writing and editing, I found this book helpful, especially the exercises. One of them inspired me to start the first chapter of my novel-in-progress, Grandma Doesn’t Know Me, with a description of the sights, sounds, and smells in a nursing home. If you write fiction and are struggling with description and setting, this book will be your friend.

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By the way, My Ideal Partner and The Red Dress are now available on Smashwords as part of its sale to support those isolated by the coronavirus. This sale will run until the end of May. Please click here to visit my Smashwords author page and download these books. As always, thank you for reading.

 

New! The Red Dress

Copyright July 2019 by DLD Books

Front cover contains: young, dark-haired woman in red dress holding flowers

When Eve went to her high school senior prom, she wore a red dress that her mother had made for her. That night, after dancing with the boy of her dreams, she caught him in the act with her best friend. Months later, Eve, a freshman in college, is bullied into giving the dress to her roommate. After her mother finds out, their relationship is never the same again.

Twenty-five years later, Eve, a bestselling author, is happily married with three children. Although her mother suffers from dementia, she still remembers, and Eve still harbors the guilt for giving the dress away. When she receives a Facebook friend request from her old college roommate and an invitation to her twenty-five-year high school class reunion, then meets her former best friend by chance, she must confront the past in order to face the future.

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Mending Relationships #Fiction #Tuesday Tidbit #Excerpt

Can a broken friendship be fixed? In the following excerpt from The Red Dress, my main character, Eve, has just met her best friend by chance twenty-five years after catching her in the act with her boyfriend. They decide to eat together.

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The cafe was nearly deserted. Without thinking, Eve and Adele found seats at the counter, as they’d  done years ago after school.

“Well, what do we have here?” said Virginia, emerging from the kitchen wearing a broad grin. “It’s  just like old times, isn’t it? I’ll bet you girls want chocolate shakes with whipped cream and a  cherry, right?”

Both women laughed, and Adele said, “I’ll also have your meatloaf special, if there’s any left.”

“There sure is,” said Virginia. She bustled about, putting ingredients for the milkshakes into an  electric mixer. “Miss Eve, I don’t suppose you want a second helping of meatloaf.”

Eve chuckled. “No, thank you. In fact, Adele, why don’t we split a shake? I had a piece of  chocolate pie on top of that meatloaf earlier, and I’m still full.”

“Honey, you need to get some meat on those bones,” said Virginia, starting the mixer. “Besides, the  shakes are on the house. I always wondered why you two quit coming in here after the prom  twenty–five years ago. I’m glad to see you back together.”

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Does Eve have an extra milkshake on top of the chocolate pie and meatloaf she ate earlier? Can she and Adelle patch things up after all these years? Read the book, and find out.

 

By the way, My Ideal Partner and The Red Dress are now available on Smashwords as part of its sale to support those isolated by the coronavirus. This sale will run until the end of May. Please click here to visit my Smashwords author page and download these books. As always, thank you for reading.

 

New! The Red Dress

Copyright July 2019 by DLD Books

Front cover contains: young, dark-haired woman in red dress holding flowers

When Eve went to her high school senior prom, she wore a red dress that her mother had made for her. That night, after dancing with the boy of her dreams, she caught him in the act with her best friend. Months later, Eve, a freshman in college, is bullied into giving the dress to her roommate. After her mother finds out, their relationship is never the same again.

Twenty-five years later, Eve, a bestselling author, is happily married with three children. Although her mother suffers from dementia, she still remembers, and Eve still harbors the guilt for giving the dress away. When she receives a Facebook friend request from her old college roommate and an invitation to her twenty-five-year high school class reunion, then meets her former best friend by chance, she must confront the past in order to face the future.

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I Could Fall in Love #Monday Musical Memories

On this Memorial Day, I’m remembering my late husband, although he never fought in any wars. When Bill proposed to me in January of 2005, he was living in Fowler, Colorado, and I, here in Sheridan, Wyoming. A month later, he sent me a Valentine care package, which included, besides the obligatory chocolates, a cassette of love songs he’d downloaded from the internet. The song I’m featuring today was one of them.

It expresses his love for me and his uncertainty that I would feel the same way and his resulting reluctance to tell me so or even touch me. Since we lived about 500 miles apart, this was natural, and I was just as uncertain as he was. But as time went by, I realized I could fall in love with him, too.

You can learn more by reading My Ideal Partner: How I Met, Married, and Cared the Man I Loved Despite Debilitating Odds. Although Bill was never a war hero, he will always be my hero.

 

By the way, My Ideal Partner and The Red Dress are now available on Smashwords as part of its sale to support those isolated by the coronavirus. This sale will run until the end of May. Please click here to visit my Smashwords author page and download these books. As always, thank you for reading.

 

New! The Red Dress

Copyright July 2019 by DLD Books

Front cover contains: young, dark-haired woman in red dress holding flowers

When Eve went to her high school senior prom, she wore a red dress that her mother had made for her. That night, after dancing with the boy of her dreams, she caught him in the act with her best friend. Months later, Eve, a freshman in college, is bullied into giving the dress to her roommate. After her mother finds out, their relationship is never the same again.

Twenty-five years later, Eve, a bestselling author, is happily married with three children. Although her mother suffers from dementia, she still remembers, and Eve still harbors the guilt for giving the dress away. When she receives a Facebook friend request from her old college roommate and an invitation to her twenty-five-year high school class reunion, then meets her former best friend by chance, she must confront the past in order to face the future.

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An Artistic and Poetic Look at Life’s Wonders #Thursday Book Feature #Re-blog

Here’s an oldie but goodie from several years ago. This book is now available from Audible with an excellent narrator. So, I hope you’ll check it out.

 

Via Thursday Book Feature: Walking by Inner Vision

 

By the way, My Ideal Partner and The Red Dress are now available on Smashwords as part of its sale to support those isolated by the coronavirus. This sale will run until the end of May. Please click here to visit my Smashwords author page and download these books. As always, thank you for reading.

 

New! The Red Dress

Copyright July 2019 by DLD Books

Front cover contains: young, dark-haired woman in red dress holding flowers

When Eve went to her high school senior prom, she wore a red dress that her mother had made for her. That night, after dancing with the boy of her dreams, she caught him in the act with her best friend. Months later, Eve, a freshman in college, is bullied into giving the dress to her roommate. After her mother finds out, their relationship is never the same again.

Twenty-five years later, Eve, a bestselling author, is happily married with three children. Although her mother suffers from dementia, she still remembers, and Eve still harbors the guilt for giving the dress away. When she receives a Facebook friend request from her old college roommate and an invitation to her twenty-five-year high school class reunion, then meets her former best friend by chance, she must confront the past in order to face the future.

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The Writer’s Grapevine Mayday Magnificence Edition #Re-Blog #Magazine

Unfortunately, I missed the deadline for this issue, but I’m sure you’ll enjoy contributions from other wonderful businesses and authors Patty promotes. Also, she’s looking for someone to write a monthly health column for the magazine. If you’re interested, please email her at patty.volunteer1@gmail.com. Now, enjoy this wonderful publication!

 

Via The Writer’s Grapevine Mayday Magnificence Edition

 

By the way, My Ideal Partner and The Red Dress are now available on Smashwords as part of its sale to support those isolated by the coronavirus. This sale will run until the end of May. Please click here to visit my Smashwords author page and download these books. As always, thank you for reading.

 

New! The Red Dress

Copyright July 2019 by DLD Books

Front cover contains: young, dark-haired woman in red dress holding flowers

When Eve went to her high school senior prom, she wore a red dress that her mother had made for her. That night, after dancing with the boy of her dreams, she caught him in the act with her best friend. Months later, Eve, a freshman in college, is bullied into giving the dress to her roommate. After her mother finds out, their relationship is never the same again.

Twenty-five years later, Eve, a bestselling author, is happily married with three children. Although her mother suffers from dementia, she still remembers, and Eve still harbors the guilt for giving the dress away. When she receives a Facebook friend request from her old college roommate and an invitation to her twenty-five-year high school class reunion, then meets her former best friend by chance, she must confront the past in order to face the future.

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