A Colorado Rockies Fan #OpenBookBlogHop #Excerpts #Inspiration

 

Welcome to another edition of Open Book Blog Hop. This week’s question is: “Do you have a favorite secondary character in your books? Or a favorite sub-plot?”

In The Red Dress, my main character Eve’s thirteen-year-old son Thomas adores the Colorado Rockies. I modeled him after my late husband, who was also an avid fan of this baseball team, though they rarely won.

Here are a few excerpts in which Thomas’s team loyalty is obvious. In the first, he and his father have returned home from a game just in time for supper. The others take place on a different evening, as Thomas anticipates watching the team play on television. You’ll also note that despite his obsession with the team, he still loves his mother.

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Thomas said, “Mom, the Rockies won. Maybe they’ll make the World Series, like they did five years ago.”

“We’ll see about that,” said Greg. “They haven’t been doing that well, so let’s not get our hopes up…”

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“When are we eating?” asked Thomas.

“The meatloaf should be done by 6:00.”

“Oh, Mom, that’s when the Rockies start playing. Can I eat dinner in front of the TV?”

“Of course not. It won’t kill you to miss a few pitches.”

“Besides, this is gonna be the best meatloaf ever,” said Ashley. “It’s Sylvia’s mom’s recipe.”

“If you say so,” said Thomas, retreating from the kitchen.

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Thomas burst in, wearing clean shorts and a t–shirt. “Dad, the Rockies are playing tonight, and they’re gonna rock.”

“Okay, buddy, that’s the spirit…”

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An hour later, Eve and Ashley were about to carry platters of food to the dining room table when Greg and Thomas came into the kitchen. They’d been watching television in the living room after replacing Julie’s bike tire. Thomas was grinning from ear to ear.

Greg said, “Since Julie’s not here, and the Rockies are coming on, Tom and I will eat in the living room.”

“But I already set the table,” said Ashley, looking crestfallen.

“Oh, I’m sorry, honey,” said Greg. “I guess I should have told you sooner. Just leave it set. We can eat breakfast there in the morning.”

Stunned, Eve could only watch as Greg and Thomas filled plates with meatloaf, instant mashed potatoes, and canned green beans. Greg had always enforced her rule of everyone eating dinner together. Had he suddenly become that big a Colorado Rockies fan, despite their losing streak?

“I love you, Mom,” said Thomas as he passed her on his way to the living room. “And just to prove it, I’ll eat all my beans.”

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Who are Ashley and Julie? Why does Greg suddenly not enforce Eve’s rule about the family eating dinner together in the dining room? Could there be trouble between him and Eve? You’ll have to read the book and find out.

How about you? Do you have a favorite secondary character or sub-plot? You can click here to participate in this week’s hop and read other bloggers’ responses.

A photo of Abbie smiling in front of a white background. She has short brown hair which is cut short and frames her face. She is wearing a bright red shirt and a dark, flowy scarf swirled with hues of purple, pinks and blues.

New! Why Grandma Doesn’t Know Me

Copyright 2021 by Abbie Johnson Taylor.

Independently published with the help of DLD Books.

The cover of the book features an older woman sitting in a wicker chair facing a window. The world beyond the window is bright, and several plants are visible on the terrace. Behind the woman’s chair is another plant, with a tall stalk and wide rounded leaves. The woman has short, white hair, glasses, a red sweater, and tan pants. The border of the picture is a taupe color and reads "Why Grandma Doesn't Know Me" above the photo and "Abbie Johnson Taylor" below it.

Sixteen-year-old Natalie’s grandmother, suffering from dementia and confined to a wheelchair, lives in a nursing home and rarely recognizes Natalie. But one Halloween night, she tells her a shocking secret that only she and Natalie’s mother know. Natalie is the product of a one-night stand between her mother, who is a college English teacher, and another professor.

After some research, Natalie learns that people with dementia often have vivid memories of past events. Still not wanting to believe what her grandmother has told her, she finds her biological father online. The resemblance between them is undeniable. Not knowing what else to do, she shows his photo and website to her parents.

Natalie realizes she has some growing up to do. Scared and confused, she reaches out to her biological father, and they start corresponding.

Her younger sister, Sarah, senses their parents’ marital difficulties. At Thanksgiving, when she has an opportunity to see Santa Claus, she asks him to bring them together again. Can the jolly old elf grant her request?

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Author: abbiejohnsontaylor

I'm the author of three novels, two poetry collections, and a memoir. My work has appeared in various journals and anthologies. I'm visually impaired and live in Sheridan, Wyoming, where for six years, I cared for my totally blind late husband who was paralyzed by two strokes. Please visit my website at: https://www.abbiejohnsontaylor.com

8 thoughts on “A Colorado Rockies Fan #OpenBookBlogHop #Excerpts #Inspiration”

  1. So many young boys follow or play baseball/football. I’m rather glad both my sons didn’t, as the only ball game I like is Tennis. To stand on the side of a freezing cold pitch with equally bored parents on a Sunday morning must be excruciating! However, instead we had the band in the garage for years. I think we were the neighbours from hell…

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