Thanks to the Magic of Stories for inspiring this post. Karen J. Mossman talks, in a way, about creating a balance between being realistic and providing an escape for our readers.
Can you think of any scenes where people go to the bathroom? I’m going to be vain and tell you that in my memoir, My Ideal Partner: How I Met, Married, and Cared for the Man I Loved Despite Debilitating Odds, I talk about going to the bathroom a lot. In one scene, I’m making oatmeal, and my husband Bill, totally blind and partially paralyzed by two strokes, is sitting at the kitchen table in his wheelchair. Suddenly, he says, “Oooh, I gotta pee. Oh, it’s too late. I wet my pants.” This gives my readers an idea of what I went through as a caregiver.
What about farting? In Larry McMurtry’s The Last Picture Show, there’s a scene in which a high school football coach flatulates while lying in bed, reading the newspaper, much to his wife’s annoyance. This gives you some idea of what kind of guy the coach is. Bill also liked to expel wind through his posterior, but I couldn’t find a way to bring that into my story, since it wasn’t related.
How about belching? I’m going to be vain one more time and give you an example from a short story I wrote several years ago that hasn’t yet been published. It’s called “Living Vicariously,” and it’s about a Catholic family dealing with issues related to religion. In one scene, a teen-aged girl who has lied about attending confirmation classes, is eating dinner with her father in a pizza joint. She’s drinking Dr. Pepper, and she says she doesn’t want to be a nun because she doesn’t want to give up the beverage. Then, she birps for emphasis. Here, I’m showing you her character.
Eating is another bodily function often portrayed. One great example of this is in the book Prizzie’s Honor. Charlie, a mafia crook, is eating lunch with his boss. It’s an Italian ten-course meal. This emphasizes the irony that evil people enjoy the good things in life.
I suppose we ought to talk about sex, but I’d rather not. None of my work has vivid descriptions, and frankly, such scenes bog a story down. Hand holding, kissing, and embracing are enough to show the reader two people are in love.
What do you think? Do bodily functions, including sex, enhance a story or slow it down too much?
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Abbie Johnson Taylor
We Shall Overcome
How to Build a Better Mousetrap: Recollections and Reflections of a Family Caregiver
That’s Life: New and Selected Poems
My Ideal Partner: How I Met, Married, and Cared for the Man I Loved Despite Debilitating Odds
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I’m very pleased I inspired you to write this interesting article, and thank you for giving me a mention in it.
Sharing is caring and as you did, I’ll be sharing this too.
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Reblogged this on The Magic of Stories and commented:
It’s so nice when someone is inspired by what you have written.
So I am reblogging Abbie’s take on this subject.
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Thank you, Karen. It was my pleasure reading your article and responding to it. Have a great day.
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I think readers expect a sex scene or two these days unless they prefer reading Christian novels. I add a bit of spice but leave a lot to the imagination. Not sure anybody really needs to know if a character needs to go to the toilet!
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Stevie, i’m sure you’re right, but I don’t like reading such scenes, so they’re hard for me to write. Thank you for stopping by. I appreciate your comment.
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I don’t like writing or reading them, but I think readers expect a scene or two, so I man up and think of England…
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Laughing out loud, Stevie, whatever works for you.
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